Snippets and Snaps

I'm writing a story based on an anime I saw derived from Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet.

((Well, it's not exactly, but I got the basis off of it...))
**Yeah, that's what they all say...**
((Oh, go suck a rubarb, you!))
**Hey, don't be quoting your lines on me!**
((sigh... I can never win with you, can I?))
**Probably so.**
((grrrrrrr))

ANYways... here's a snippet for you, you can read the rest on Wattpad...
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"Your highness! Can you stand?" His groan answers for me. I try to pull him on my back. I'm stronger than I make out to be. "Your highness! We've got to get out of here, let me-"

"Take Ciel." He shifts his weight and I drop him back on the floor. I stare at the young girl beside him. She was shivering with fear, too scared to speak.

"But, sir, I-"

"Take Ciel!" He groans again as he adjusts his posture. Raising a shaky hand in the air to the wall behind him, the bricks slide away to a closet. "Aslan..." I look to him once again. "Take the sword and the chain. Cloak yourself and lead Ciel and yourself to safety."

"But your highness!" No matter what I try, it's useless. Then behind us I hear the groan of the man. He was regaining conciousness. I sheathed my own sword and dashed to the secret closet. Grabbing the sword and the box that was also inside - guessing that was were the chain was kept. Taking the cloak by the window, I grabbed the princess' hand and carried her on my back, draping the cloak on the both of us.

"DADDY! DADDY! DON'T! I DON'T WANNA! DADDY!" She tried kicking and punching me to let her go. I had to pinch her leg to stop her.

"M'lady, please, be quiet, we have to get out of here!" I sat at the edge of the windowsill, peering through the smoke and flames for a safe landing.

"ASLAN! NOW!" The king screams. With this command I jump, just as the sound of a sword slicing flesh escapes the window.

                                                                         - "Crescents Restoration"