Thursday, May 10, 2012

The Gael's Apprentice- exerpt 2

"Puir wee thing... so young, and yet already marked.." Eothain awoke, the entire lower half of her body in pain, yet dulled, throbbing. She slowly propped herself up with her elbows, and took a look around. She was in  a warm, fire-lit room: small, but cozy. She was lying in a low, hand-made cot, with a warm, cozy wool blanket tucked around her tender frame, decorated with Celtic spirals and knots and what appeared to be a cross in the center, but unlike any she had ever seen. Settled near the bunk was a small, rough table, with a pitcher of water and a wooden mug perched on a thick, heavy-looking manuscript.

Silhouetted against the fire, a tall, broad shouldered man stood, his back to Eothain. in the dim light from the fire, the man's long, rust red hair could be easily picked out from his dull, earth-toned robes. He might have easily been some wandering monk, except for two things that stood out in the firelight. Belted onto his waist was the most beautiful sword she had ever seen, wide at the hand guard, then narrowing, and back again before narrowing down to the tip, with the grace of the ocean tide, the blade and hand guard etched in gold and silver, intertwined. Strapped to his forearms, seeming to glow in the blaze of the fire, were intricately crafted gauntlets. Extending to his knuckles, each plate and strap were polished to a gleam, and each plate was engraved with a spidery, ethereal script, weaving and winding and crossing over itself, with that same strange circular cross embossed on the hand plates.

This man clearly was not the Rider, but- she looked back up at him, to realize that he was looking at her. His eyes were kind, very intelligent and gleaming with past laughter and joys. That is what she first noticed. his beard was carefully braided, and strung with colored clay beads. In the fire's light, he didn't appear to be much older than her, about as old as Liam, but his eyes, interwoven amongst the laughter and the deep piercing intelligence was age. Age, mixed in with seemingly centuries of deep pain, and a calm, steady Light. Whoever he was, she was definitely safe around him.

3 comments:

  1. He sounds like a very interesting character!

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    1. Lets just say that he proves to be an invaluable character later into the story.

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  2. I absolutely loved the second paragraph. I could picture him perfectly. I can't often do that with stories but you described him wonderfully!

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